A ROUGH DRAFT!
Eclipse
The moon and the sun cannot align like they used to.
An angle, a degree, is always inaccurate.
The way the moon relaxed under the sun’s glory
Or the way the sun embraced the moon’s inadequate size.
And how desire filled long galaxy gaps
But now the moon is unidentified under a shadow
and eclipsed by the sun.
Awesome. This is very nice Melody. It's a metaphor for some relationship right? Speaker (moon), other (sun). Or mother/father. I love the "inadequate size" part.
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Thank You! Yes, definitely speaking about a relationship between the 'moon' and the 'sun'. And how the old "Things will never be the same as they used to" kind of thing occurs here. Thanks again!
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